Bethany Osset's score, mary-sue test with notes

      Total: 21        universe: Kuroshitsuji/Black Butler          species: Stoat demon  
   score: Clear- wait, what?

 1. Cool nickname: Stray. +1

 2. Eyes change color/ other unusualties: Stray's eyes are orange-brown, but turn magenta and are slitted. Negated, all demons in-verse can do this.

 3. Hair/fur changes colors: Bethany is a stoat demon, and in winter her hair turns white, but she dyes it. + 2

 4. She is quite ideal for her time-period. +4

 5. Beth is strong, but not muscular, and doesn't do all that much for it. negated: in verse, most demons are like this.

 6. fantasy race: Bethany is a stoat demon. Negated, the universe from which she is derived focuses on supernatural beings, and the demons aren't particularly rare.

 7. unusual pet for the setting: Bethany has three dogs and one white horse, but the unusual pet is her ferret. +3

 8. witnessed/caused death of a lover/family member/friend: Bethany obsessed over a nephilim girl named Ambroisine, who died from illness. +3

 9. intelligent/prodigy: negated. Even the young demons in-verse tend to be more intelligent and faster learners than their mortal anchors.

 10. Shapeshifting ability: negated. The majority of demon characters in-verse can switch between a human form, their true form, and 1-2 animals/plants/whatever falls into their spheres.

 11. strong healing powers: negated. While not all the demon characters have them, it's common for the angels, demons and shinigami to be able to heal themselves from near-fatal wounds, or in the demons' cases, everything from scrapes to headshots.

 12. Strong sixth sense: negated. All shinigami and most demons have this in universe.

 13. Immortal and never aging: negated. She is actually a very young demon considering her age is in the triple digits.

 14. Very good memory: negated. It isn't uncommon for immortal beings in the setting to recall fairly irrelevant and detailed things centuries past.

 15. Insomnia: negated. Her kind does not need sleep. Ironically on the once-in-a-few-months occasion she does sleep, she's inert for quite some time.

 16. very weird habits: Bethany isn't too good at fitting in. She has some very weasel-like tendencies which can be unnerving. +4

 17. Stray simply does not get art/ does some dressmaking but the quality is negligible(see outfits section of my gallery) -1

 18. misc music stuff: Learning guitar and a good singer but also a showoff and she's had her fair share of lessons gone poorly. + 5

 19. they are good at writing/poetry and writes poems +6

 21. She is a barmaid in stories set victorian era and a waitress at a steakhouse in modern settings, but she does not care for those jobs much and took them to supplement the expenses of fulfilling her owner's more costly requests and later to fuel her own spending on wines. -2

 22. Special/different sort of soul: this could be justified (demons can't directly steal eachother's souls in verse,) were it not for the fact that she partakes in a rather risky method of patching experiences over each other rather than simply devouring the souls of her victims each time. +3

 23. In her more modern setting stories, she is an alcoholic, and is more often than not drunk or at least tipsy. She drinks when upset and dispite her fast healing rate she is not completely immune to the effects of consumed poisons. She reeks of alcohol even when sober. This led to her not being around to speak to Ambroisine in her final hours, and to losing her friendship with Kathrine Vale, and they barely begun to renew their friendship at the time of the latter's death. -7

 24. they are a bully: Very much. Hey, she's a demon, what do you expect? I'm not counting this.



    I haven't a bloody clue how she passed this.